Saturday, 7 November 2015

Script 2nd Draft

This is the second draft of my script for my film, Unbalanced.
I have highlighted in yellow the changes that occur in a scene, whether that be a change in dialogue or action.

1 comment:

  1. You definitely show development in your drafts. Remember to describe the action in the scenes in which there is no dialogue. What happens? Where does the scene take place? Interior or exterior? What can we hear? Music? Sound effects?

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